It looks really good, especially for your first vector. I'm no expert, but the only faults I can spot from my phone are the missing eye highlights and a little mishap with the orange part of the mane. Nonetheless it looks really good and you should definetely continue doing these vectors
its a very, very good vector for your first!!! but is there is a mistake on her left eye, because it doesn't look right to me? anyway its really really good
Nonetheless it looks really good and you should definetely continue doing these vectors